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 There are two tiers of readers we are targeting with the Report.
-The highest priority targets are people likely to use the report as a resource: members of the internet health movement.
+Our primary reader audience is people likely to use the report as a resource: members of the internet health movement.
 Specifically, our primary audiences are:
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 * '''Activists''' who work on internet health issues in their spare time. Examples: Software Professional, Web Development Teacher, Students, Family's tech support, Artist
-In the second tier of readers are '''media'''. We want them to share and promote the report in their networks.
+In the secondary reader audience is '''media'''. We want them to share and promote the report in their networks.
 ===Contributors===