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 Mission
-Mozilla's mission is to promote openness, innovation, and opportunity online. [http://www.firefox.com Firefox], [http://www.drumbeat.org Drumbeat] and our other [http://www.mozilla.org/projects projects] are the tools our community uses to build a better Internet.
+Mozilla's mission is to promote openness, innovation, and opportunity online.  We do this by creating great software, like the [http://www.firefox.com Firefox] browser, and by providing tools, like the [http://www.drumbeat.org Drumbeat] site, that people can use to
-The only way we are able to achieve our goal is to have people who share our beliefs [http://www.mozilla.org/contribute get involved].  Coders, artists, writers, testers, surfers, students, grandmoms&mdash;anyone who uses and cares about the web.
+Building a better Internet is an ambitious goal.  We believe that this is possible though when people who share our beliefs [http://www.mozilla.org/contribute get involved].  Coders, artists, writers, testers, surfers, students, grandmoms&mdash;anyone who uses and cares about the web can help make it even better.
 Promo: Learn more about the [http://www.mozilla.org/about/manifesto values and principles] that guide the pursuit of our mission.