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 <h2>[https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?formkey=dERCYVFSQVhyWkxDUC1haFJpRjRrc0E6MA#gid=0 Tell us what you think]</h2>
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 <h3> What are these "Webmaker Projects," anyway? </h3>
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 Using Mozilla Webmaker tools like Popcorn, Hackasaurus, and Webpage Maker, you can:
-* remix any web site to make it your own,
+* remix web sites to make them your own,
-* make your own pages, web videos and other great stuff in a matter of minutes,
+* make your own pages, interactive videos and other great stuff in a matter of minutes,
-* learn the basics of webmaking skills like HTML and CSS along the way.
+* learn the basics of webmaking skills like HTML and CSS.
-<b>We're preparing a set of these projects for the Mozilla Summer Code Party.</b> The goal: teach the world the basics of coding and webmaking. Through bite-sized experiences that are easy, social and fun. We'll also invite contributors and partners to share their own webmaker projects as well, creating a ginormous summer cyclone of making, hacking and ninja-fication.
+<b>We're preparing a set of these projects for the Mozilla Summer Code Party.</b> The goal: teach the world the basics of coding and webmaking. Through bite-sized experiences that are easy, social and fun. Partners and contributes will be able to share their own projects as well.
-<h2> Tell us what you think</h2>
+<h3> Tell us what you think</h3>
-<b>We're looking for brave beta testers like you for the prototype projects below</b>. In particular, we're looking for your feedback on questions like:
+<b>We're looking for beta testers like you for the prototype projects below</b>. Are they:
-* <b>Are the projects easy to use?</b> Where do things feel confusing or broken? Is it easy to dive in and get started fast?
+* <b>Easy to use?</b> Where do things feel confusing or broken? Is it easy to dive in and get started?
-* <b>Are they fun?</b> That's crucial! Where are they most fun? Where do they lag?
+* <b>Helpful for learning?</b> Do they serve the goal of teaching HTML, CSS and other webmaking basics?
-* <b>How could they be better?</b> We'd love to hear your specific feature requests, suggestions and aha moments.
+* <b>Fun?</b> That's crucial! Where are they most fun? Where do they lag?
-<h2> Webmaker Beta Projects </h2>
+<h1> Webmaker Beta Projects </h1>
 <p><b>Make your own meme</b></p>
 [[Image:internetfamous.jpg |270px|left]]
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 '''Tools used:'''WebPagemaker  '''Skills:''' HTML & CSS, design thinking ''' Difficulty:'''Intermediate
 <h3>[http://htmlpad.org/internetfamous/edit GO!]</h3>
 <p><b>Play hackable games in the web arcade</b></p>
 [[Image:arcademap.jpg |270px|left]]
-<p>HTML is a funny-looking language. It's written in brackets like <this> and </this> and sometimes uses quotes "like this." In this project, you journey through the world of HTML by exploring the syntax behind it. Use the comments written */ between these */ signs to navigate your way. Your goal: unlock a broken map of the web arcade to activate new missions and explore brave new webby worlds.
+<p>HTML is a funny-looking language. It's written in brackets like <this> and </this> and sometimes uses quotes "like this." In this project, you journey through the world of HTML by exploring the syntax behind it. Use the comments written */ between these */ signs to navigate your way. Your goal: fix a broken map of the web arcade to unlock new missions and explore brave new webby worlds.
 </p>
 '''Tool:'''Webpage Maker  '''Skills:''' HTML''' Difficulty:'''Easy'''
 <h3>[http://htmlpad.org/mapofthearcade/edit GO!]</h3>
-<p><b>Webstructables: make a tutorial</b></p>
+<p><b>Make your own "webstructable" how-to</b></p>
 [[Image:webstructables.jpg|270px|left]]
-<p>Have you always wondered "why people don't get hand turkeys right? or why it is hard for some to sleep at night? " Well the time has come for you to make your contribution to the world of the open web and create a fine webpage tutorial using your HTML &amp; CSS and Popcorn wisdom.
+<p>This project lets you create your own web page tutorial. Use your new-found HTML, CSS and Popcorn wisdom to create the world's greatest how-to. What do you want to make today?
 </p>
-'''Tool:'''WebPagemaker  '''Skills:''' HTML & CSS, Popcorn, teaching others''' Difficulty:''' Advanced
+'''Tool:'''Webpage Maker  '''Skills:''' HTML & CSS, Popcorn, teaching others''' Difficulty:''' Advanced
-<h3>[http://htmlpad.org/webstructables/edit Click here to Make It]</h3>
+<h3>[http://htmlpad.org/webstructables/edit GO!]</h3>
 <p><b>Stuck in the 90s</b></p>